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Friday 18 October 2019

Make a poem

Hello my name is Ashlee and I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model school. And today I have written a poem and a piece of art as well here it is.

 if I was a cloud I would shelter the hot sunny day.                       If I was a cloud I would stop you from getting sunburnt               if I was a cloud I would sing the world to sleep                             if I was a cloud I would hide the world away 

if I was the moon I would light up the cemetery night  

So yeah that is all I hope you like it bye for now.


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2 comments:

  1. Unknown22 October 2019 at 14:05

    Kia ora, Ashlee, my name is Bailee and I got to Grey main school.
    I liked the way you added a picture.
    Maybe next time you can make the poem a bit longer.

    Overall it was a great blog post.

    Keep up the great work, Bailee

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  2. Anonymous25 October 2019 at 12:40

    Hi Ashlee your art looks amazing i wish the i can do that Dougal lochiel school

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