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Friday 24 April 2020

A little poem.

Hello bloggers how are you sorry I have not posted in a while well today I have a nice poem. It's about boss baby and chicken nuggets I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. Are you enjoying quarantine or not comment down below, Here it is.


I want some chicken nuggets Yes I doYou may think I don't know what do Oh no that's just you Eww eww ewww You could have a….


Burger but it will just be gluten. Stop snooping you’ll be fine If you were pooping. Whoop whoop whoop you are the poop. But listen here I am the boss
Oh no no no not boss lady I’m boss baby so watch out


what do you guys think bbbbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....................

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous30 April 2020 at 12:33

    Hello Ashlee,
    Its me Alan your post buddy and I really liked how you wrote that song. But it is missing one thing. That thing is rhythm. If you want to make the blog better you might want to check on the punctuation and also you might want to add rythm to it.
    Kind regards
    Alan

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  2. Anonymous14 May 2020 at 09:57

    Hello Ashlee,
    Its me Mykiala, I love this blog post I like how you have done a song.
    Maybe next time you could reread the poem because in some parts it doesn't make sense.

    Anyway great job!!

    MYKIALA YMS!!

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