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Wednesday 27 May 2020

Maya and Crazy Lady.

Hi bloggers how are you today? Well I am great I am a student from Yaldhurst Model School. Recently we have been writing narratives I wrote an amazing narrative yesterday I am really proud of it its about a lady who is trying to inject maya with laughing gas to make her never stop laughing. And then crazy lady will poison maya. Here is a DLO of my narrative enjoy

bye bloggers did you like it? what is your favorite color?





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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous27 May 2020 at 14:15

    Hello Ashlee,
    I really enjoyed your story except for the last part. Would you mind changing that. Anyway your story had a really great idea. You just need to look on the punctuation and write some more.
    Kind regards
    Alan

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