Friday 27 September 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Ashlee, its me Parwin!
ReplyDeleteI really like your slide show because it goes by itself and it caught my attention. I also like the background as well. I like the fact that you have introduced yourself in you blog post as well.
This reminded of when I did the same thing as you but I also included my younger brother's 3 wishes and what he would wish for. Weren't you meant to include one of your family members thoughts as well? I'm pretty sure you were!
I think to improve, you could add why and although I know why you have done it, its because I am in the same class but if I were someone from another class or school then I wouldn't know why you have done so maybe add why you have done it in the future.
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Thank you pawin for commenting on my blog post.
DeleteI do not remember having to put one of your family members in but thank you for telling me.
what is your favorite blog post so far.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison from Rimu!
This was a pretty creative blog post!
I really liked the background and I think that it has matched the thewam really well. I liked how you also got straight to the point.
Now I have a few tips for you to help improve your blog.
I Think that you could change the background to a different one each slide or add in some illustrations.
I think that You could also make it more eye catching and write a bit more before your DLO, like what type of blog is this an why you're creating it.
This reminds me of when I have done this. I really liked your wishes. I wished for world peace, and other dog and I dadly forgot the last one.
I noticed that some of our wishes are similar.
Why do you want these things?
-Maddie :)